15
Nov
08

tear drop

Dew
Drop
Drips

Slow
Slide
Slips

Trickles
Streaming
Rolling…

Lucent
Pearl
Stops

Gem
Jewel
Tear

Glints
Hints
Imprints

Without
a
sound

and pulls
at your heart
though you never thought

a
silent
water
fall
could
call
you
back
so hard


2 Responses to “tear drop”


  1. 1 thecrimsonthread
    19 November, 2008 at 10:50 pm

    this is simply gorgeous…the sounds that conjure up the liquid flow…and the emotional tug at the end – inspired.

  2. 2 blonderblondest
    28 November, 2008 at 11:54 pm

    great rhythm

    i love this kind of thing


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